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In advertising, perception is everything.

Each morning, I have a coffee and look at the beach. There’s usually a lot of pondering involved. Sometimes, it’s deep pondering on the workings of the universe, and other times it’s more superficial, like ‘why isn’t the letter ‘w’ called ‘double v’ rather than ‘double u’? Or, wondering if Volvo drivers are secretly happy now that the world has Tesla drivers.

Anyway, this pondering changed direction when I saw a person walk past with their phone perched in a gimbal while they did a ‘walk and talk’ video. This prompted me to think about where advertising is at the moment, and where it’s headed.

In simple terms, you could say that advertising’s job IS perception. After all, it creates, manipulates, and manages how a product is perceived.

But what about the ad industry itself – how is it perceived?

Apparently, size does matter.

It seems advertising used to be a bigger deal.
Big, mass media.
Big ideas.
Big productions.
Big budgets.
Big salaries.

Everyone knew it, from banks to breweries.

But then, things got smaller.
Media splintered, and catered to smaller audiences.
Screens got smaller.
Timelines got smaller.
And budgets and salaries followed.

Perception plays a role here.

If the screen is smaller, and the audience is a single person rather than multiple people gathered to view a single screen, it’s no longer perceived as ‘big’. The grandeur is gone.

In the ad industry, when the internet first started making inroads, we all became familiar with a client’s production budget shrinking to reflect the media in which the ad would be shown. Many clients expected the production of a 30-second film to be much cheaper if it was ‘only going online’.

Can you imagine what a car dealer would tell you if you went into a showroom and wanted to buy a car for a cheaper price and offered the rationale that you’d only be driving it on particular roads?

When cost-cutting kills more than your costs.

Most people would be familiar with the old triangle of values: ‘Quality, Time, Cost – have any two’. It’s based on the premise of two values coming at the detriment of the third (i.e. you can have the work done well and quickly, but it won’t be cheap OR you can have the work done well and cheaper, but it’ll take time OR you can have the work done cheaply and quickly, but it won’t be good).

(I was always of the opinion that quality wasn’t expendable, so one of the other two values had to be sacrificed. Not all marketers agree.)

Then, along came generative A.I.
And, with it, the promise that you can have all three values.

Now, whether it currently delivers on quality is up for debate. Problems with image continuity, anatomy, and receiving what you actually requested is still an issue. But we all know the tech will eventually get there.

So, what then?

Well, that’s when perception might really come into play.
Right now, it’s being over-looked, either unconsciously or otherwise.

Perception doesn’t appear on a spreadsheet.

When people know that something has taken effort, they assign a higher value to it.
It’s why people get their photo taken in front of the Sydney Opera House.
It’s why people appreciate a beautifully prepared meal.
And, it’s why brands put the words ‘hand-made’ on labels.

However, when we get to that stage where people will know, or assume, that someone has simply punched in a few prompts to create something, that same value is unlikely to be assigned.

Instead, the output becomes highly disposable.

The inference by the viewer/reader/listener is ‘that business has not bothered to invest in their message, so why should I invest my time in it?’

Of course, consumer psychology like this doesn’t show up on a marketing spreadsheet, but it’s something that needs to be considered.

After all, once everyone has seen behind the curtain and knows how the magician does his tricks, the magic itself disappears.

DUSTIN LANE
Brand Strategy | Creative Concepts | Copywriting

Visit risinggiants.co or dustinlanecreative.com

Big, bold predictions for 2025.

Every year around this time, people make ridiculously bold predictions for the year ahead. In the past, I’ve sat by and watched, wondering how people can be so full of conviction and so full of shit at the same time.

However, this year you don’t have to worry about that because I’ve compiled a definitive and completely genuine list of the five biggest things you can expect to happen in 2025. And remember, you heard it here first.

1. Haircuts

On 20 January, Donald Trump is inaugurated as the 47th president of the United States of America.

Then, while scrolling through old tweets, the big fella comes across a story from 2014, where various news outlets reported that North Korea had made a law requiring all men and boys to have their hair styled in the same way as Kim Jong Un.

Quite taken by the idea, Trump introduces a similar law in the USA, ostensibly as a way to boost patriotism, unite the country, and help make it great again. Subsequently, all American males are soon sporting brilliant Trump-style combovers.

An entrepreneur spots the need for hair products that will better cater to this particular hairstyle and appears on the TV show, Shark Tank, spruiking his new range of haircare products called ‘Hairforce One’. The entrepreneur gets the finance he’s seeking, and Hairforce One goes on to become the fastest-growing FMCG product of all time.

2. Facts on the riviera

Following Zuckerberg’s decision to remove fact checking from Meta, lots of fact checkers find themselves without a job. A few manage to find work on TV quiz shows like The Chase, however most are employed by the Cannes Advertising Festival to check the claims made by ad agencies in the case studies they submit.

Don’t say you weren’t warned.

3. Virtual dining

Seemingly inspired by everyone’s willingness to outsource their thinking to A.I., the wellness industry jumps on board with a new weight-loss treatment. In a similar way to thinking for people, this new product saves people from actually eating. Instead, it simply describes to the user what the food tastes like so they can enjoy the food vicariously, without the calories.

Due to its success, many people are bombarded with telemarketing efforts from competing A.I. dining products, each proclaiming that their descriptions and adjectives are more delicious than others.

Uber Eats even gets in on the act, after realising that it’s quicker and cheaper to send customers an email that describes the meal, rather than have tangible food delivered.

4. True 1-to-1 advertising

As people can no longer believe that what they see on a screen is real, there is a move by advertisers to introduce a new 1-to-1 model to convey their clients’ messages. It involves hiring real people to visit the homes of the intended target audience to deliver an in-person spiel about a product or service.

Of course, they try and portray it as “a new, proprietary” offering and employ designers to create a great-looking slide to represent this in their credentials decks. However, in reality, it seems they just dusted off the old playbook used decades earlier by door-to-door vacuum salesmen and Mormons.

5. Red planet reality

With the objective of creating energy for electrical cars, an unnamed billionaire begins to build his version of The Matrix on Mars. Thousands of influencers sign up to be part of it, reasoning that their life has become such a manicured, fake veneer, this is the logical next step. It’s intended to be a real-life mashup of The Truman Show, Ready Player One, and Fahrenheit 451.

Of course, in the meantime, if you’d like to keep things real and do some good, no-nonsense work, contact dustinlanecreative.com

DUSTIN LANE
Brand Strategy | Creative Concepts | Copywriting
risinggiants.co

Seven red flags in advertising.

To an outsider, advertising and bullshit might seem to go hand-in-hand. However, I’ve always tended to take a no bullshit approach. I have little time for hyperbole, jargon, and other crap that gets in the way of the goals we wish to achieve.

This can sometimes make scrolling through LinkedIn feel like floating in a sea of crap, as I encounter AI-written ‘thought leadership’ pieces, critiques of ads from people who’ve never actually made an ad, and people with wonderfully self-indulgent titles like ‘unicorn’ and ‘ninja’.

So, in a bid to combat some of the bullshit, offer some reality, and dispel some myths that have grown like a post-Christmas waistline, I thought I’d jot down a few red flags I regularly come across.  

1.    ‘We need someone to do everything for $50k per year.’

Okay, I get it – your budget is $X, but that doesn’t mean you simply combine all the things you need done into one role and advertise it for your budget. If it were, rather than hiring electricians, carpenters, plumbers, painters, concreters, tilers, and landscapers to build a house, I could just invent a role like ‘Habitational Construction Viscount Unicorn’ and seek someone to build an entire house for $50k.

Firstly, it’s not going to happen. And, secondly, even if it did, would it be a house you’d want to live in?

The simple truth is that if you want something done well, there’s no such thing as a ‘one-person agency’. It’s the same reason your GP doesn’t also dabble in a bit of dentistry and brain surgery. You get what you pay for, no matter how inconvenient that might be for the budget.

2. ‘Isn’t copywriting just the words?’

Look, the ad industry hasn’t done itself any favours with the ‘copywriter’ title. My mum has never even understood what a copywriter does. These days, the plethora of people you can find online proclaiming to be copywriters ranges from people who can use spellcheck on a computer to ex-journos (and anyone in between, who has ever said the alphabet).

The truth is, the ‘writing’ part is actually secondary in the role of a copywriter. The bigger, and more difficult part is the thinking. And by that, I mean both strategic thinking, and conceptual thinking.

‘Hey. Isn’t strategy covered by the planner?’, I hear you say. Well, any copywriter worth their salt is also a strategist. David Ogilvy. Leo Burnett. Mary Wells Lawrence. All great copywriters, yet all inherently great strategy planners. Even the fictional TV character Don Draper is a great strategic thinker.

And, yes, of course there is the writing. What you may not know is that for every word you see in the final output, there are plenty behind it that have fallen. For example, a good copywriter considers the difference inferred by a bank that tells its customers ‘Your withdrawal has been approved’ versus ‘Your withdrawal has been confirmed’.

A million decisions like this happen behind every piece of work you see (if it’s been done well, that is).

3. ‘The strategy and idea is all done. We just need…’

Hear that? It’s alarm bells ringing.

Sure, on first glance it seems innocent enough. After all, the strategy and idea is essentially where all the heavy lifting happens. If that’s done well, the following jobs (copywriting and other ‘executional’ parts of the project) should be simpler. But the important words are “if it’s done well…”. Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn’t.

If it isn’t, it’s like being asked to put a roof on a house, when you know the house won’t be able to take the weight of a roof.  For this reason, I’m always sceptical when the author of an idea doesn’t want to (or can’t) make their own idea actually work.

I’ve always held the position that the best person to make the idea work is the originator, because you make a bed differently if you’re the one who has to sleep in it.

4. ‘The visual assets are done. We just need a brand positioning.’

This one always unleashes a raised eyebrow. That’s because anyone who understands communication would understand that visual assets, typefaces, brand colour palettes, copy style and tone all have to be pulling in the same direction. And the North Star for that direction is the brand positioning.

To try and retro-fit a brand positioning in this way is like trying to lay the foundation slab of a house – after you’ve already built two of the bedrooms and the kitchen.

Any professional communicator understands brand architecture, the process, and that everything about the brand needs to work together.

5. ‘Can’t I just teach myself and do it?’

Well, yes. But we also need to accept that knowledge and talent are not the same thing.

The simple truth is that some people are quite unique in their ability to do a particular task. For example, regardless of how much I study the biomechanics of running, or how many mornings I get up at 4am and train the house down, I will never be able to run faster than Usain Bolt. Sure, my running will likely improve, but I will never be an awesome runner.

It would be the same for an artist. Sure, you can learn that mixing yellow and blue makes green, but you may never have the vision to foresee a human-figure called David lying within a 9-tonne block of marble.

So, while you can improve through education and training, there are some talents you may never master – no matter how many Simon Sinek or Gary V videos you watch.

6. ‘Everyone’s a creative’

When I say ‘creative’, I’m talking about copywriters, art directors, designers, directors, and their ilk.

This ‘everyone’s a creative’ phrase is the ugly, bastard-cousin of ‘ideas can come from anywhere’. Both phrases discount the skills and talents required to do the job correctly. Part of this is due to the current low barriers of entry, largely brought about through technology. Yes, Canva, Apple et al – I’m looking at you.

The truth is, simply having the tools doesn’t mean you know how to use them correctly.

To be clear, I’m not talking about their technical operation. Instead, I’m talking about the underlying skills that dictate which tool to use and when to use it. (eg. What does a close shot mean? Why doesn’t that typeface feel right? Is the colour palette communicating my intention? Should the language be colloquial or more formal? What does that posture imply?)

These are the true skills and talents required to be a professional communicator, rather than simply knowing which button to press.

7. ‘But, can you do social posts?’

In a world of internet memes, I imagine this one sitting up there, with the headline ‘Tell me you don’t know what an advertising creative does, without telling me you don’t know what an advertising creative does.’

Any true copywriter (or art director) has made a career from being a professional communicator. This includes consideration of the medium and context of how and where the message is consumed. Trust me, any creative who has worked in mediums that include TVC, pre-rolls, direct mail, out-of-home, point-of-sale, eDMs, posters, radio, flyers, and almost anything else, can also do social. Yes, social might have its own nuances, but so does every other medium.

In short, it’s a bit like asking a Formula 1 driver if they know how to drive an automatic Toyota Camry.

Brand Strategy | Creative Concepts | Copywriting
risinggiants.co

If you’d like to keep things real and do some good, no-nonsense work, contact dustinlanecreative.com

Copywriters ain’t copywriters.

Okay, let’s turn the clock back. Right back, to the 1980s.
Castrol Australia had a long-running campaign featuring re-occurring gangster characters. Those characters always spoke about the high quality of Castrol oil, and how not all oils are equal. This all anchored on their campaign line, “Oils ain’t oils”.

An old Castrol ‘oils ain’t oils’ ad.

It was obviously based on an insight that many car owners thought any oil could do the job.

Well, the same can be said about copywriters.

The truth is, there are copywriters. And then, there are ‘copywriters’. Not all are created equal.

See, in recent years, the term copywriter has grown to cover people of varying skills. Seemingly, it can now refer to a wide range of people – from a ‘traditional copywriter’ (whose skills includes equal parts marketing strategy, creative concepts, and wordsmithing), to a part-time journalist, right through to someone who simply knows how to use spell check on a computer.

As someone who’s been ‘brought up’ through the traditional ad agency model, I obviously have a horse in this race. After all, it’s how I make a living.

However, the problem arises when a client hires a ‘copywriter’ but thinks they’re hiring a different type of copywriter. Or, they’re not quite sure what a copywriter does. Or, they compare quotes provided by different types of copywriters (which is akin to comparing oranges and apples).

Perhaps, this is best presented in pictures, as I’ve set out below. So, if you happen to be looking for a copywriter, please remember, ‘copywriters ain’t copywriters’.

DUSTIN LANE
Brand Strategy | Creative Concepts | Copywriting

Visit risinggiants.co or dustinlanecreative.com


Is the advertising industry sailing in the right direction, or is it time to jump ship?

Lately, there’s been a lot of talk about change in the industry due to a number of factors – the advent of new A.I. not least among them.

And that brings to mind a couple of stories (please bear with me here – there is a point. If it helps, maybe imagine me sitting on a rocking chair, wearing a cowboy hat while I peel a piece of fruit and eat the pieces straight off the knife).

Story 1: The Boat

A few years ago, my daughter took Philosophy as a subject at school. I was happy about that as it would teach her to contemplate and consider things – essentially, to ‘think’, rather than simply memorise and regurgitate information.

Anyway, she would sometimes share with me the content of a particular lesson or an anecdote the students had been given.

One such discussion was this:

Imagine you’re on a boat.

The boat leaves Port A, destined for Port B.

Throughout the journey, parts of the boat are replaced – a new plank of wood here, a new fitting there, a new sail and so forth.

Ultimately, we get to a stage where every single piece of that boat has been replaced. Every plank. Every fitting. Every sail.

The boat arrives at Port B.

Is the boat that arrived at Port B the same boat that departed from Port A?

It’s certainly something to consider.

Now, for shits and giggles, let’s call that boat ‘The advertising industry’.

While you ponder that, let’s continue.

Story 2: The Paper

In a previous life, prior to being an advertising creative, one of the jobs I had was working for a regional newspaper. That newspaper was owned by a media company that owned around 29 other newspapers, all based in different towns spread throughout the state.

Of course, the bean-counters at the parent company soon realised they could centralise their printing for all the different newspapers rather than maintain a number of costly printing presses. So, they did, and started to print all 30 mastheads at one location, using one printing press.

Now, there were people who used to work on the other 29 printing presses, so the parent company sought to find them other jobs within each location.

My particular location was not the one that now did all the printing, so I got to see firsthand people who had worked on the printing press now placed in jobs working as graphic designers, laying out ads by desktop publishing on a computer. This was quite a different role than working on the printing press and, with all respect to those people, graphic design was probably not their forte.

Sure, taking a very primitive view, one might say ‘both jobs involve pushing buttons with the aim of creating a printed item’, but beneath that, there’s a myriad of differences. Knowledge or skill in things like operating printing machinery, printing blocks, and print runs, does not translate into designing layouts, visual communication and artwork.

While the outcome is the same – a published ad – the job to get there is miles apart.

It’s kind of like someone who loves horses being approached by Henry Ford saying, ‘Hey, you work in transport. How about coming over to my factory and helping put car engines together?’


Why am I telling you this?

Well, I guess both these stories land in the same place, which is ‘at what point does something evolve so much that it becomes something completely new?’

There’s already been plenty written about A.I. platforms like Midjourney and ChatGPT.

Depending on where you read it, and who it’s written/promoted by, it ranges from point A to point C, below:

A) “Everyone’s job is f*cked”
Some think A.I. will make many people’s jobs redundant.
For example, is it really that difficult to envisage a world where ChatGPT writes a script which then progresses into a later version of Midjourney to produce a finished ad/film/TV show?

B) “This is a kick-ass tool”
Some think that A.I. will be a great ‘assistant’, effectively looking after the more tedious chores within a project so they can get on with the bigger thinking.

C) “A.I. produces crap”
Others think that there’s nothing to be worried about because the output of A.I. isn’t great (yet!). But let me ask you this, how many clients are actually buying ‘great’. Once reviewed by a committee and research, greatness is easily undone. In some cases, clients don’t even care for ‘good’. Often it just needs to be ‘good enough’. This is why there’s so much rubbish out there.

So, whichever school of thought you belong to – A, B, or C – the two stories above tell us three things:

Stand back and have a close look at how much your boat has changed. If you’re not on the boat that suits you, it might be worth jumping to a new one or, better yet, building your own.

Whether something is an evolution or a revolution comes down to your perspective.

There will always be a need to ponder and think. How that actually manifests itself or pays the bills in the future is up to you. Essentially, that’s your brief.

Oh, and speaking of briefs, if you have one, or a project you’d like me to work on with you, let’s chat.


DUSTIN LANE
Brand Strategy | Creative Concepts | Copywriting

Visit risinggiants.co or dustinlanecreative.com

Why all copywriters should be art directors

I’ve spent a large chunk of my career thus far working alongside one art director. He was a brilliant South African art director (on a side note, I only know 3 South African art directors and they’re all brilliant at their craft). However, we did tend to blur the line between ‘art director’ and ‘copywriter’. That’s not to say we interfered with each other’s craft, but we did offer each other an opinion.
And that brings me back to the heading of this post.

I’ve seen bad art direction murder good copy. And likewise, I’ve seen copywriters that have little consideration for art direction. This is the very reason why you need to have knowledge of the other’s craft.
I never gave it much thought until I worked with a few different art directors.
I thought it was weird when they were surprised by my interest in the line breaks of a headline, or the choice of typeface, or if the look of the ad was suited to the tone of the copy.
It struck me that some teams must still work in a fairly disparate way, with the two crafts somewhat divorced from each other.

For example, look at the following outdoor ad I noticed recently.
Okay, so it’s not going to keep any advertising award juries up at night*, but just look at that line break in the headline.
outdoor ad 1It completely reads the wrong way. The first three words have to sit together for the the intended flow and rhythm.
However, the art director would then be left with ‘LIVE’ as a widow.

So what’s the lesser evil? A weakened headline, or bad art direction?

This is where the team should have worked together. Maybe they could have bumped “LIVE” up in size so it looked ‘less lonely’ on a line all by itself? Maybe they could have amended the copy to have an extra word or two? Maybe they could have indented the word “LIVE” to make it look like it was an intentional art directional move?

Either way, an ad is always stronger when both crafts work together.

*a favourite saying of one of my old creative directors, used when he was less than impressed.

DUSTIN LANE
Brand Strategy | Advertising Concepts | Copywriting

Visit risinggiants.co or dustinlanecreative.com